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Still as death, silent as the dark,
    Empty as the cold, it sits there.
There is has been for centuries,
    seeing all, nothing seeing it.
It longs for one thing: company;
    the one thing it will never get.
Nothing dares draw near its surface
    in fear their eyes will be opened.
Not the swan, not the stars nor man.
    Even the majestic mountains
         Go to lengths to avoid its face.
In loneliness it waits longer
    for the single brave creature
         who will look into it, realize
              the hidden truth, touch it with a
         finger's tip, and cause uncalming,
    calling, wondrous ripples.

But, until then, it waits.
I was going to post one of my love poems, since it's Valentine's Day and all, but most of my love poems are really dark...not exactly awesome for the holiday. xD This was the lightest one in my collection of poetry I illegally write in the margins of my school notes. Ehe...
Maybe I'll post one of my love ones if I get pestered enough.
It's tough to choose a category for this one...deals with nature and humanity...
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wonderstruck111 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
This is so cool!
I love your writing so much XD
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!!
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ColourfulRain Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I read "ripples" as "nipples". O_O
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woooow xD
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TabiCat2012 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! That's good and deep! I love it!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :iconblushesplz:
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Lunarwolf210 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it!!!!!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:love:
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SirenaClaws Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow o.o Meaningful
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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