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We sit down beneath
our favorite tree
who only shares its shade
with you and me.
Crack open that picnic
basket, let's start to eat,
enjoying it with
critters at our feet.
Do you remember how
you and I
fell for each other? Oh, how
our love reaches the sky.
Your smile simply melts
all of my worries away.
Don't you see how our love
continues to grow each day...?

...

"Who are you?"
Inspired by my own fan fiction, I wrote this a while ago, long before (spoiler) Jack actually forgets the reader, but almost right after I got the initial idea.
It also goes along with another manga that I have read, called Hibiki's Magic by Jun Maeda. It's a really good series, I highly recommend it (even though I can't seem to find Volume 3 ANYWHERE).
In any case, hope you guys like it. I'm not a big fan of rhyming poetry, so I rarely write poems that...well...rhyme. This is one of the VERY few that I've written that rhyme.
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Photographer
Awe this is adorable and it fits with ES so well!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!~
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Photographer
you're welcome!
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summerday27 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So simple and sweet :heart:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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LapprentiSorcier Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist
This totally reminds me of Roxas and Xion from Kingdom Hearts.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dude...yes.
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TabiCat2012 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its beautiful! :iconhappytearplz: I can totally see the connection with the fanfic!!! You're amazing at writing and drawing!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!~
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Dude, you really need to think of writing as a career choice. Your description,understanding and usage of emotional depth that fills the reader. I'm sorry I know this is random!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I've considered it, but always ended up saying, "nah, I'd never make it." Maybe I'll try it as a side-job. :)
And randomness is always appreciated here!! It makes life so much more worth living. x3
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zeldafangirl713 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it!!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay!
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Lunarwolf210 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this one even more!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you~~ :iconcblushplz:
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nebulaebae Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, I love that series! ;o; I only have the first volume, though, it makes me sad. ;-;
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah... ;A;
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ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it, I immediately thought of Jack forgetting me when I read this....now I'm sad again... :(
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awww...
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ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:(
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kgwriter Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
*sob*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsobplz:
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