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Hmm?

Oh, hello!

I didn’t see you standing there.

What’s up?

…Quiet one, ain’tcha?

You seem like a good listener, though.

I could use a listener.

Say, would you like to hear a story? It’s a love story. But I promise it’s not a drag. It has noble heroes, a complex villain fighting them for all the goodness and light in the world, with twists and turns at every corner and stuff. Trust me, it’ll really tug at the heartstrings, play with your emotions on all ends of the spectrum. That is, if I can tell it right…

Yes? You would?

Awright!

Go on, take a seat. Get comfortable. It’s a pretty long tale.

There ya go.

Oh hey, what’s your name? C’mon, don’t be shy.

Heh, I like it.

So, this story is about the love between the eternal spirit of winter and a mortal human being, like you, and the trials and tribulations that they went throu—

My name?

Who am I, looking the way I do, with the ice on my clothes and this odd wooden stick?

Hold your horses, chatty Cathy. We’re getting to that.

Now, where was I?

Ah, yeah.

And the trials and tribulations that befell them.

Hmm, what’s the best way to tell this…

Hey, do you have a good imagination?

Fantastic!

I’ll tell it like that, then.

It’ll make it more personal. For you, I mean. Easier to get lost in the story.

In my opinion, at least.

Good therapy for me, too, other than just simply telling the fable to someone. It lets me live in their mind…

Who, you ask?

Someone very near and dear to my heart.

No, they aren’t around anymore. No longer with us. Just recently, in fact…

Haha, don’t worry about it! They live on up in here, forever immortalized in my memories. “Everlasting,” is a good word.

I’m going to put you in their spot in the story. Sound good?

Excellent.

So, get this.

It’s the beginning of winter, the air outside cold and crisp. But you’re inside, the walls of your house separating you from the elements. You’ve just lit a fire, one of your many books in your hand…

Fine, fine. Since you’re being so persistent about it. Man, once you start talking, you really don’t stop until your questions are answered, do ya? Thank goodness you still seem like a good listener. And I think we could be great friends. Promise no more interruptions? I really, really do swear that it’s a good story. You won’t want to interject, save maybe a sniffle or laugh here and there. I’ll answer your questions so they aren’t floating around in that head of yours and taking from the story. All right?

Okay then.

Yes, the same one I hold so close to my heart is the same one in this tale, whose spot I have put you in for the sake of storytelling. Their name was…

And then there’s me.

My name is Jack Frost.

And this…

This is my story.
And with that...Everlasting Snow has come to a close.
Hope you guys approve of the Epilogue.
I just really adore stories that do the whole "full loop" kind of thing.
A final little twist for the tale.


I wrote a journal with my sentiments in it. Please read it. I promise it's worth your time. :') [link]

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 64: [link]
Side-story "What the Heart Remembers": [link]

~.::snowflake:Fin:snowflake::.~
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:( NOOOOO!!!!!! I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MOAR I TELL YOU!!!!!!!!!!  MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
T-T
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
tissue? :icontissueplz:
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
yes.... thank you! *takes several tissues*
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Fliddyfox Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I now do not know what to do with my life. It's like part of me is now missing.
That had to be the best story I've ever read and I might have to read it again :o truly amazing! You have no much talent!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you sososoosso much!! I'm thoroughly glad you enjoyed it :)
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dinopasta33 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hate you so much for that fact you didn't make it last longer. *breaks down into sobs*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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dinopasta33 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! :iconsolluxrageplz:
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Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
I WANNA HUG HIM SO BAD
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
:iconbrohugplz:
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YasaminK Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Excited Blush Happy Finally I can't believe what I just read!!!!!! It was amazing!!!!!!!!! God dammit that was awesome!!!!!! 
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really happy you enjoyed it as much as you did!! :D
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YasaminK Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
:D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) :D (Big Grin) 
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Luna-Mini-Milka Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for this story ;w;
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank YOU for reading it and for all the favorites, not to mention the watch!! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. :)
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Luna-Mini-Milka Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :3
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cicilove2 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
I was so into it I finished it in one day and dang you are a great writer
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!!
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Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
I finish the story yay ^^

....and I want a hug, this story was really just everything rolled in one, I loved it =^^=

Thank you for the amazing story (as well as my staying up at 5:30 in the morning x3 ) :3
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm thrilled that you loved it. :D Now go get some sleep!! hahhaha
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Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
yes! : D......*passes out in recliner to get some sleep*
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uvray12 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You my friend, deserve a llama. Llama jump 
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
? WHAT IS IT WITH LLAMAS!?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awww, thank you!!! thanks for the llama and the watch :D and I'm so happy you enjoyed the story~
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uvray12 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Sure!
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lilpunner17 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i read this last year and i just set up an account...i just have to tell you how happy this made me :) my first fanfiction
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm honored that it was your first, and even moreso that it made you happy. :) Thank you so much!!
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DreamAngel-Ren Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That was a very sad yet heartwarming story; I cried close to the end, but once I've reached the end, I felt happy and peaceful. You have done a very wonderful job with this tale and I visualized every bit of it. You deserve a pat on a back, a golden star, or better yet, :iconsnugglyplz:

Thank you for taking your time to write this marvelous story! Now I want to watch Rise of the Guardians again :D (However, this time I will be thinking about your story along the way, lol).
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for the snuggly. x3
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DreamAngel-Ren Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! :]
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Sakura2891 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist
Second time I read it.

I'm still crying at the end...
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm happy it can still do that for you :)
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Sakura2891 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist
But but but! It's so shagfkegfbcdjugeuic!!!!!!! Feeeeeeeeels!!!!

I hope you will write another fanfiction as awesome as that!!!

... There... I watch you...
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Trust me, I hope I write something like that again too...

thank you for the watch!!! :iconlawooplz:
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Sakura2891 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist
:iconasdfghplz: I can't wait!

You're welcome~
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skull-kitty101 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're an amazing writer! Your imagination is amazing and your writing skills are phenomenal. I wish I could write as well as you and that my stories could give that little happy feeling inside and when someone reads it, a smile spreads across their face. Absolutely love this story and all your others. Besides the POV of this story, it really felt like I was there living the adventurous life with Jack Frost and the rest of the guardians.
Thank you so much for this wonderful, heartfelt story. It made my heart feel warm and was beautiful story line :3 <3

-Skull-kitty101
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, for reading, for the compliments, everything. And for the watch, oh my gosh thanks a million for that! :D
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skull-kitty101 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahaha you're welcome!
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are an incredible writer! You should seriously get this published. You poured every emotion known into my heart in multiple combinations. And the loop thing? Brilliant! I'm so happy I finally read this. I wish I could hit fave multiple times. Now I have nothing to procrastinate with. I'm so sad that it's over. I'm going into Post-Everlasting-Snow-Depression... Stupendous job! Keep it up!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I went into the same thing after finishing it, haha. But it was so much fun to write, and even more fun to have people read and have reactions like you did. Maybe someday I'll get it printed and bound for my own keepsake. I hope to become a published writer in some way or another in the future, but who knows. I feel like a one-hit wonder with this story.
Thank you so very much for reading all of it, for all of the comments and favorites (they really brightened my days), and just...for everything! It brings me such joy to know my writing could evoke such emotion and be loved, I still can't believe it to this day. And I thank you a million times over for being a part of that, and I hope to see you again in the future. :)
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure you'll come up with more amazing stuff. And even if you do end up being a one-hit wonder (which I seriously doubt and hope that doesn't happen), at least you'll have written something extremely wonderful that touched the hearts of so many people.

You're welcome! This Everlasting Snowflake will always be here with plenty of comments, faves, and eagerness to see what's next for you! :D
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LovelyAmyVamp Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013
You are such an excellent writer!!
I've just finished reading all of Everlasting Snow and my gosh did you capture every single emotion possible for a human being.
I even cried a river lol xD
Congrats on that and please please continue to write!
I'm sure any genre is possible for you :D
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhappytearsplz::iconletmehugyouplz:
*aherm*
It makes me so incredibly happy to hear all of that...that you enjoyed my writing and think that I'm a good writer, at that! I can't stop smiling. I'll never stop writing, and I hope to see you with my future endeavors. :)
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LovelyAmyVamp Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
Well you are :)

Think you might make up your own story with your own characters some time? ?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I already have, a couple in fact. But I'm kind of scared to post them.
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LovelyAmyVamp Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
I'm sure they're still awesome but it's your choice in the end :)
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GaiaTheHedgehog15 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I READ IT ALL IN TWO HOURS FLAT!!!! I reeeeeeaaaaaally feel like watching RotG now. =P
Though, I could watch it all day if it meant seeing JACK all day. :iconchinaaruplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOO! SUPER EPIC HIGH FIVE. :highfive:
Hence why I've watched it way too many times, eheheheh... x3
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