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It’s completely out of this world.

How could a stick—a fairly ordinary-looking piece of wood—transform so quickly?

He just touched it, and it came alive. The moment he wrapped his hand around his staff, a magical, bluish white ice spread over the area on and around where he was grasping it, thick around his hand and progressively thinning until it stopped a few inches in either direction.

You can’t help but smile at the remarkableness of it all.

“Do you have a sled?” Jack Frost asks as he turns to face you once again, beaming.

Do you have a sled? “I think so…Lemme go check,” you tell him. You hear him laugh a little as you dash off to your garage. What is the spirit of winter plotting?

You spend a good five to ten minutes rummaging through your mess of a garage for a sled or anything you can use as one. Just as you’re about to give up, you find the perfect thing for the job.

You rush back out to the living room, holding a good-sized storage bin lid over your head.

Your heart immediately sinks.

The fire has been put out and isn’t even smoking anymore. The blanket is neatly folded and put on the arm of the couch. The tray and the food it once held are put back into their proper places. Jack’s cloak that you had taken off of him is nowhere to be found. The room is cold.

But not a Jack Frost kind of cold.

An empty kind of cold.

Still with a tiny spark of hope in you, you take your lid and fling open the door, running outside with searching eyes. You look in all directions for any sign of a white-haired teenage boy holding a wooden staff, listening for even the slightest sound of the familiar laughter.

Nothing. No sign of him anywhere.

Your fantasy has ended as quickly as it started.

You drop your storage bin lid and halfheartedly kick the snow at your feet. You were really looking forward to having an adventure, even if it all turned out to be a dream. You knew, somewhere in the back of your head, that it was all too good to be true. But you didn’t want that little part of you to turn out to be right.

It begins to snow.

Just a weather phenomenon. Science. Not caused by a mythical spirit.

You pick the lid back up and start to make your way back to your house.

But it was all so real…Jack Frost…real…

“Careful, it’s slippery!” you hear a familiar, mischievous voice playfully warn you.

“Huh? Wha—WHOA!”  You slip and fall, ending up on your makeshift sled.

The next thing you know, you’re sledding backwards down your hill at full speed.
Here it is, Chapter 8! I'm sorry it's so short, but the next one is probably going to end up being pretty darn long. I want to keep writing, so I'll stick Chapter 9 up by the end of today too. :)
SO I HAVE A KIND OF REALLY AWESOME STORY TO TELL ALL OF YOU GUYS. I was re-reading Chapter 6 (I reread my chapters so I can stay in the same writing mindset and keep it as consistent as possible, i'm sorry if I failed hard this time around) and my hands, which I have on my keyboard for scrolling, start to get really cold. Just my hands. I take them away from my keyboard, and they're a normal temperature again. Put them back near my laptop and BAM cold again. It's just the area above my keyboard, too, nowhere else around my laptop. Air conditioning isn't on. I move my laptop, still cold around the same area. Utterly confused, but being the super Jack Frost fangirl that I am, I begin to think "oh my gosh, Jack Frost is sitting here telling me to keep scrolling." I get inspired enough to read the chapter aloud and guess what? As I read the parts about dear Jack, my whole body gets cold, like I'm standing out in snow kind of cold. The other parts, I'm still getting progressively colder, but not as cold as the lines directly involving Jack. After I read aloud the last line, the cold leaves me, and I get the sense that it's happy with me. Then the wind blows from out of nowhere.
Moral of the story? Jack Frost is very real.
Great, now I look like a super duper crazy person and I've probably scared all of you off from continuing to follow my fanfiction.
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 7: [link]
9: [link]
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
pewdiepie gasp :faint: OMGOMGOMGOMGOMOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Extreme OMG OMG - Watch that that. is . AWESOME!!!!! JACK FROST IS WITH US!!!!!!
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
Yes, yes he is. I can't claim to have seen him... alas... I'm a bit old in terms of age, but I still believe. I donno... maybe I'm one of his oldest believers. 
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Age is just a number, you're only as old as you let yourself be. :3
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AGuardianOfDreams Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
ha ha, yeah there is a lot of truth to that.
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AuraLady Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
cover your ears kids! Jack's about to get an ear full! JACK YOU **insert all curses known to humanity**
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my o.o
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
O-oh sh**!
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ETB-Emily-The-Bride Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WTF JACK!?!?!?!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha
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Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
*you're sledding backwards down your hill at full speed* 

screaming my freaking lungs out x.x
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think most of us would o.o
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Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
whether out of joy or scared out of their freaking minds x3
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
here is what I would be saying right at that exact moment...



WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahahah XD
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally believe you :D I'm really hoping that I'll get to see Jack this winter. Nothing has happened yet since I developed my firm belief, but I have gotten a lot of rain this summer...I don't know if that was him or if Mother Nature was just in a rainy mood :shrug:
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minanarulover Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
Rainy summer you say? Are you in the south, lol. The rain wouldn't stop!
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope, I'm in the north :dummy: I really don't know why we got so much rain, but it happened at least 3 times a week almost :meow:
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minanarulover Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
I know what you mean. I think it rained just about every friggen day. we barely got a summer after the 4th of July
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Same here.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
didja know that most rain starts out as snow first when being formed in clouds?
but then it melts and falls as rain...
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So it could've been Jack... :squee: personal revamp 
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winkyfish Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Artist

I've loved reading your stories so far! ^-^

Seeing that we all wish we can get a visit from Jack Frost (xD), I don't think it's possible for myself.

Where I am, it never snows in the Winter.

I've never seen snow before, and I wish I could.

But that doesn't mean that I'm gonna stop believing in him. cx

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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so happy you're enjoying it!! :D

Where I am, it never snows either, except for high up in the mountains. And yet, I've seen Jack. So don't give up quite yet. :)
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winkyfish Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Student Artist
Trust me, I won't! :meow:
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trainernight Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
Hey I believe your story and if I am correct there was some one else who has seen Jack AND even Pitch but I am not sure. But still I'm hoping he gonna pop by at some time. I don't know if he will but I'm hoping he will and that's how much I believe in him. And I really don't care people think I'm crazy. Thing I say the most: "I'm weird and I'm proud of it." ^-^ So I don't care...
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I say the same thing!! Us weird people, we gotta stick together
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trainernight Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Oh yeah! Take that normal peoplez!!:pointandlaugh:
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Starwarrior4ever Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
geez, now I don't know WHAT to think. I'd always thought of Jack Frost as a super-cool fictional character (no pun intended), but..... the laptop story.... makes you have second thoughts..... 'Course, I'd need solid evidence that Jack really exists (being the realist that I am) but that is a really interesting phenomenon. :O_o:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I was skeptical at first too, but so much more has happened...I can't help but believe 200% now XD
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WarriorsCatsLover333 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoaa...Thats creepy!! But anyways, I agree, I'm a TOTAL JackFrost fangirl!!! <3
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:highfive:
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's so awesome!!! lol you got a visit from Jack! lol ive had a few things happen to me. ill be taking my dogs outside to do their biz, and once, my sister came out with me and asked me if I thought jackf rost was real. when I told her I 100% believed in him, a gust of wind started blowing around me, and snow started to fall. it felt like someone was trying to play around with me. i got excited and said 'Jack Frost?' and i swear, i thought i heard laughter, even my sister looked at me and asked me if i was laughing, and when i said no, she frekaed out. then, that night when i went to bed, i opened up my window to get a good view of the snow. i fell asleep and woke up about an hour later cuz i got super cold out of nowhere, and i looked at my window and it was covered in frost, it was so cool and so pretty. lol i must sound cray-cray :P
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
dude, I completely believe you. I had a really super similar experience (oddly enough while i was taking my dog out to do HIS biz xD). It's in one of my journals actually... man, I'm going to miss him like no tomorrow once Spring gets into full swing
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay! and lol, what a coinkidink! XD yeah, you and me both :/ but he likes to mess around with the weather, we get quite a few cold windy days here, even in the summer, so I have a feeling he'll try to stick around every once in a while, even now, he seems to be fighting Spring off, we've gotten a few snowfalls these past days, and its been kinda cold, but im grateful, cause that means the spring flood wont hit as hard!
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013
OH MY GOSH THAT STORY. JUST. UNNF. WHY CAN'T I HAVE A STORY LIKE THAT.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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CertifiedChocoholic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Hahaha! I wish that could've happened to me! What you told us, I mean, the cold keyboard? :D Sigh...

I have never gone sledding, nor can I. But I do wish I can go on a roller coaster~! Never really went on one. D:

SINcerely,
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness, you're going to have to one of these days!
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EnglishRosa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This story. I cant even asadsf34ntp2qrjvnfejb[trjkl
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha XD
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EnglishRosa Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this story. So much. I can't even.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm happy to hear it!! :D
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SweetGaleria Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You are not crazy at all, you are so much lucky!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Student Photographer
Holy crap! I don't think you're crazy I think your so lucky! I really, really love this!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, not crazy! XD And I'm glad to hear it! :meow:
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animefan12oo Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omg he is reall I would scream inside !!!! plus he makes it snow like omg this guy is awesome ! awesome story too
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :D
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animefan12oo Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
your welcome
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BlazeandIcy Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
HE'S REAL
I KNEW IT!
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