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Another tap.

The bird flutters impatiently, its small feet temporarily leaving the windowsill, a muffled tweet coming through the glass.

Completely numb, you rise from your place on the couch and walk over to the window.

But it blew up into snow, you think as you recall an isolated snowfall, looking down at the puffy white creature.

Its small, snowy eyes meet yours.

A new one? But…that’s impossible…that means…!

The bird hops over to the side of the ledge, where the window ends and wall begins. It taps multiple times at this spot, tweeting at you once again.

You understand.

Heart racing, your fingers find the frame.

And you open the window.

The cardinal zooms past you in a flurry of wind, its wings narrowly missing you. It circles up to the ceiling after a lap or two around the room, chirping excitedly.

All you can manage to do is watch it in its miniscule magnificence, completely surrendered to the spell it casts in its tiny flight, your back turned to the opened window as you observe the airborne critter.

Thin strands of snow trail from the tips of its wings as it soars, much like a Jetstream from a plane.

It definitely is a different bird.

A reminder of an event past.

Or…a continuation of a moment that was cut too short.

Bored with the rest of the house, the bird returns to you. You instinctively hold out a finger, and it plops down on you, its snowy complex sending a cool chill through your hand.

“I-If you’re here, then so must—”

The bird interrupts you with an animated tweet, looking past you, as if it has caught sight of a long-lost friend.

It lifts from your finger, flying back outside.

Following it, your hand slightly raised in protest, you turn around.

“Hey, where’re you goi—”

Then, you’re cut off, your words stolen from you.

Just inches from your face is a head of shaggy, snowy white hair. The back of a deep blue, frost-covered hoodie is merely centimeters from your fingertips. Your proximity lets you catch a whiff of pine trees and winter.

You take a leap back out of surprise, your eyes never wider, your heart threatening to beat out of your chest.

A long, wooden staff leans casually on the windowsill, its hook slightly invading the room. The cardinal has taken another perch on the pale finger of its creator, who is leaning against the windowsill, elbow propped up on the small ledge.

With a final, musical chirp, it flies off into the night.

It…it can’t be…

After watching the cardinal fly away for a few seconds, he stands up straight, taking up his staff in the process.

And then, he turns to face you.

A pair of wintery, deep blue eyes lock onto yours, accompanied by none other than the mischievous smile that you have come to know all too well.

You clasp your hand on your mouth, your jaw dropping. You take another step back.

“Heya, snowflake.” He leaps up onto the sill, balanced lightly on the balls of his feet in a crouch, his free hand resting in the pocket of his hoodie. “Long time no see.”

You blink and squint, going as far as pinching yourself to make sure this isn’t all a dream.

He chuckles, his eyes twinkling. “I’m real all right. It’s me, (your name). Y’know, me,…”

You feel confused, happy tears begin to well up in your eyes. He’s there. He’s really there…

“…Jack Frost!"
Really short one, guys...I think this is me making up to myself for all the really long ones. xD Plus, I really wanted to write but couldn't write for long since I'm off to work and homework in a few minutes.
Reunited at last!
Right?
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 61: [link]
Chapter 63: [link]
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:iconlinkluver1:
Linkluver1 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student Artist
Why does something seem off.... -.-
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner 5 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
because this entire story is based on how things are never truly golden x3
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AuraLady Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
he **sniffles** remembers **sniffles** me?! **pulls him close for a passionate kiss** If you friggin took on all I gave up to save your ass I'll be kickin it!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner 5 hours ago  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha XD
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2014
?!!!........ ;-; tear of confused joy.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
love this story you are a great writer 
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!!
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:iconjeffyarts:
jeffyarts Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014
you're welcome
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artlover626 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Student General Artist
omg I want to fangirl so badly but I can't with my family awake!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, I've gotten that one a lot!
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Nightinals Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
Me: Greatttttt……I'm dreaming……*goes in emo corner*
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYayayyayaAYAYyayYAYAYAYA
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Nightinals Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
THE RMO CONER IS JUST SO COMFY :3
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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Darksgirl120 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
omg yaaaaaaaay he remembers me xD
....but but but.....ah i'll find out in the next chapter, this story's got me to captivated to stop (aside from making a few comments here and there) 
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really glad it is!! :D
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uvray12 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE SAW MEEEEEEE!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EEEEEP
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Jacks back wooooooooohooooooo!:iconhappytearsplz::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce: thank you so much!!!!!!!!!! :happybounce::iconpervyjackfrostplz::happybounce::happybounce::iconpervyjackfrostplz::happybounce::)I love this fanfic
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha, so glad you do x3
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amberflicker Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHY DOES MY FAV BUTTON NOT WORK MORE THAN ONCE!?!?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i have encountered that problem more than once D:
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG :squee: :faint: :happycry:

Adbwosddhshuwhzkxbxhjshwkqbsjahsjwhwokjxbdjnajxnshskxjd

OH MY GOSH JACK IS BACK AND HE REMEMBERS ME!!!!!!!!!!!! :love:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, yes he does :D
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LUVCORNBREAD Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
hfkfhiualhfsuhfalkhfiualhfudsihfaliuhuaihfa

i'm so happyyyyyyyyy
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahah XD
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weeya1 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
sa;lklkfhlkdfhlksfhklfhkjfhjkkjdhfjkfhdjbdfioherjbrbvubljvblvublebvherlbjvbljkbvjbvjkvbrbvjkfbvkjbrvbvkjbsdlvb!!!!!!!1

THE FEELS!!!!!! :onfire:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahah XD
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:iconsoniclover626:
SonicLover626 Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
JACK IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YES HE IS
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Candy-chuu Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay ur back jacky!! :tighthug:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
how- wha- why? *faints from to much confusion*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahah XD
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
wakes up *what happened?* jack tells me everything again *I faint again* jack: sigh... this is going to be a long day.
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5British1Kitty5 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Oh thank god he remembers me!!!! I can't tell how happy and releaved I am!!!! XD
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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SapphieTaffy Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAAAAAMN.
EFFING MAGICAL MOMENT. WHILE LISTENING TO AWESOME, ELECTRONIC MUSIC.

I'M SO GLAD I FINALLY GOT THE CHANCE TO FINISH THIS. THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. AAAAAAAAAAAAA-- :iconcryforeverplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Music really adds to it!~
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SapphieTaffy Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed. And through all the chapters and waiting for more and more the whole time, this moment was probably the biggest jump, biggest heart-chenching surprise for me as a longlasting reader.
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Hold up! That's what your Everlasting Snow readers should be called, the ones with you from the start! The Longlasters... Longlasting Snowflakes! Yeah! :D FOR WE ARE EVERLASTING!

Yeeeah I dunno... ignore the crazy cat lady..
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahahaha xD
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OoOoOoOmnaOoOoOoO Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013
oh wow wt a plesant surprise:D!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very pleasant!
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LineFail Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
JACK, OMFG JACK! I'VE MISSED YOU SO FXCKING MUCH. BECAUSE OF YOU I OWE MY SISTER A DOLLAR. OMG.
I just died of happiness.
But-why, why do you remember me, Jack? djsfnhoiaeioagughaeiuohjyaegg
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i can't even
how do I breathe again?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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mak96k Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! I literally got so excited that I began to dance while laying on my bed and got a cramp in my leg! (If it was caught on camera, it would have probably gone viral.)

Imagine a girl laying on her bed getting excited over a this chapter. She starts wiggling and trying to hold in the fangirl squeals because she doesn't want to be caught and grounded at 1 am reading fanfictions. In that wiggling, she twists and you hear a pop. She gets a cramp in her left leg and now she's holding that leg and rolling back and forth holding in the urge to vocally express the pain while still being excited about this chapter! Yep, that's me.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my x3 im happy my writing was able to do such a thing though and that youre enjoying it as much as you are!
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mak96k Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, sad that it's over, though. I love the ending, yet I also am sad about it. You truly are a talented writer.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much :)
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KateHannahV Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
EEEPPPP (fainted) best friend looking at me like I am crazy. :batty: I wonder.
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