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“More snow expected all throughout today in (your town’s name),” the weather(man/woman) announces. “Wind gusts of up to 30mph will hit today, too. Be sure to bundle up and be careful out on those roads!”

You smirk ever so slightly at the meteorologist’s precautions, losing interest in the news as it goes from the weather to the main news anchors. You take another bite of cereal as you stare outside the nearby window at the snow and grey clouds that cannot wait to unload more.

There’s frost on that window, too.

Nothing like the one on your bedroom window, of course. This one’s more plain. Wondrous, like any act of nature, but still nothing like the art embroidering the bedroom’s view.

Nevertheless, curiosity gets the best of you and you get up to examine it, secretly wondering if there’s any little tiny design in it that you’re missing. You go over each part closely. Somewhat to your disappointment, you find nothing out of the ordinary here. But wait, in the very last part of your close study of the frost…

In the tiniest handwriting you’ve ever seen, someone has written “JF” in thin letters through the frost on the very bottom right of the window.

Your heart begins to race. Like a person possessed, you run back to your own window, flipping on the light so you can see everything better. You ignore the rest of the window, your searching gaze dashing straight to the bottom right corner.

Tiny letters. Thin. Scratched through the ice. “JF.”

You cover your agape mouth with your hand, utterly astounded and confused. He…He’s real? You slump onto your bed, unable to stand. But how? That’s impossible…That’s right, it’s impossible. This is just a few idiot thugs playing a trick. That’s all it is…

Still in your pajamas, you slip on a hoodie and go outside, believing that you need the fresh air to calm down and clear your mind. You sit down on a chair on the small porch, bringing your knees up to your chin and holding your legs, resting your head on your kneecaps.

It takes a bit for your heart to slow down to a normal pace and you to stop shaking. You take a few deep breaths and look out at the postcard-worthy scene spread out before you. The snow-covered world causes you to forget all of the oddities and questions.

So calm and wonderful…guy, I love the snow. You unravel yourself, letting one of your legs dangle off the chair, your bare foot mingling with the crisp, cool air. Winter is by far the best season.

A sigh of awe escapes you. “It’s so beautiful,” you whisper aloud to no one. You begin to wish that there was someone that you could tangibly thank for bringing this exquisite miracle to the earth.

A sudden icy breeze caresses your right side. You think nothing of it. The news did say gusts were expected.

“It’s really something else, isn’t it?” you hear someone to your right quietly say. You become nervous. You’re hallucinating again. Was there something in that cereal?

To get your mind off it, you start to sing.

“Chestnuts roasting,” you begin, “on an open fire.”

You put your hands behind your head and close your eyes. You smile at this next part, remembering the snowflake from yesterday.

“Jack Frost nipping at your nose…”

A chuckle stops you in your tracks. It came from your right. Definitely more audible. There’s no mistake, no way that this could have been a figment of your imagination. Wary, you slowly turn to your right.

There’s a boy. Sitting…no, crouching…on the top of a long, thin stick.

You jump, completely startled. “Holy—! Who’re YOU?!?” you exclaim as you fall out of your chair.

He loses his balance, teetering on the top of the stick for a second or two trying to regain it. He yelps as he tumbles to the floor, the stick falling beside him.

He’s obviously unconscious. You start to get up cautiously, using your chair as support.

The first thing you notice is that oddly long stick that he was perched on moments before.

It’s no ordinary piece of wood. It’s a long branch, ending in a hook and a long line swirling around and up it, sort of like the stripes on a candy cane. You’re immediately reminded of a shepherd’s stick.

A staff…

Brow furrowed, curiosity getting the better of common sense, you slowly approach his limp figure.
Chapter 4 of my fanfiction!
Finally, we get a little Jack action!
Keep an eye out for Chapter 5, it'll be up soon~
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
5: [link]
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:iconjeffyarts:
jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
I love that song. i definitely believe in Jack Frost. this story was make for me.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!! I"m so glad to hear that :D
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
:squee: 
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! I just finished my first EVER Jack Frost x Reader fan fiction called Jack Frost? Chapter 1

and may i just say...  your version is way better!  X D
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
haha awwww, thank you!! x3
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh...Legend, are you a mind reader or something? Every now and then I catch myself randomly singing The Christmas Song (even in the summer) and now you put it in a reader insert...Great minds think alike, I guess! :aww:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I seem to have done that A LOT in this fiction, and all I did was put things in that I would like...
There are tons of people out there that I would love to meet and no doubt would become friends with, such as yourself, since we all seem to have such similar tastes hahaha
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, us awesome, creative, weird (in the best way possible) people gotta stick together :D
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funkylime123 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, this is really good so far!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!! and thanks so much for the watch :D
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Midnight4568 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013
:iconlaplz:
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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WarriorsCatsLover333 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe.
I'm rereading this.
Compliments to the max, this is a very bittersweet and touching story, chapter 64 always makes me cry. I love it a whole lot. Good job!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
u-uwah, rereading it already? *sniffles* i'm so happy :iconhappytearsplz:
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
funny, I JUST realized, I have the same initials as Jack XD I FEEL SO SPECIAL!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
JOF?!? or just JF? x3
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol just JF :p
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
coolio :3
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist
haha i made jack pass out
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, yes you did XD
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CertifiedChocoholic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Okay, I am going through this story and then I remember that this IS looong. O.O *ignores what she remembered*

I love it, now! :D

SINcerely,
CC
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahah xD I hope it keeps your interest through the whole thing
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mak96k Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:rofl: Couldn't stop laughing at their reactions to each other!

Me: "Holy-! Who're YOU?!"
Jack: *falls over and is knocked unconsious*

Hilarious!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahah XD
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hilbert1998 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I wonder what'll happen when he wakes up?!...
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so many chapters left to go x3
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MeganFrost89 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
He's unconcious? :iconplanningplz:

:iconlaughingplz: JUST KIDDING xD... a little
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bahahahah
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Yay! I get to meet Jack!! But why is he unconscious? Please wake up Jack! Nuu!! >•<
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
at least he finally does~
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meekgeek Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay he appears!!! xD Im so happy you tied in the song <3 It fits perfectly!
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just adore that song. It had to go somewhere. x3
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SilverEyeShinobi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no! I'm so sorry Jack XD please wake up lol
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha
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melijan Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this story is SO awesome. can't wait to read more :la: :love: :heart:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!!
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katnisseverdeen4life Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's strange, because today we have tons of snow. And frost is on every single window.
(Except the only part I wish was real is jack).
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awww lucky. green Christmas here.
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Kyuubecky Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student
I KILLED JACK!!! *hides under bed* please forgive me!! ...*pokes Frost with stick* Is he....no, wait he's breathing....*sighs*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good sign x3
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... I always read Jack x readers that pay no heed to that song. That song that I think of every time I think of Jack. It really makes me want him to nip at my nose, though he seems more fond of my toes... *rubs cold feet in annoyance*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, I never see it anywhere else, and it annoyed me.
Same here, though not the toes part. x3
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It gets me really mad sometimes. You need to make Jack kiss the reader's nose at one point. It'll make me a satisfied fangirl person.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
for sure :)
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I started randomly singing that song when I was bored today. I burst out laughing halfway through it... My brain is so screwed up I imagined Jack as a chestnut roasting on an open fire, screaming because he's burning, while the guardian guy Jack licks his lips in anticipation to eat it, because he doesn't know the nut is him.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
........i don't know if I should laugh or be terrified
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Kurotalia13 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was a mixture of both and immediatly started hugging my pillow pet for comfort. That made me feel tiny, but hey, pillow pets are the softest pillows you will ever find. Just avoid their head. Then I sang the song again and I thought of the usual, Jack kissing my charrie on the nose. God, I'm so weird *suddenly realizing how weird I am*
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
trust me, if people knew how weird i really am, i doubt i'd have any friends xD
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LilRedBird101 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay she fInally knows after four chapters. I really really like this fanfic. The the use of the English vocabulary is exquisite.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you kindly :)
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