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It feels as though you have a breath mint resting on your lips.

At first, you’re shocked. You don’t know what to do. What the heck is happening? You don’t resist, but you just stand there, motionless.

The subtle scent of pine trees hypnotizes you and you give in, becoming less rigid and holding yourself closer to him. You close your eyes as well. You soon find yourself lost in the odd yet wonderful sensations provided by the kiss.

It’s surprisingly warm. Cold, yes, but the soft warmth that lies beneath his touch is stronger in this intimate act. The outer coldness makes him taste slightly minty, making your lips tingle oh so slightly. The kiss is as soft as snow falling gently on your face.

You feel so safe in his arms, enveloped in his embrace, his body held tightly against your own. You forget entirely about the dark surroundings, lost in his inner light. Your heart is racing. You can feel his own beating just as hard.

He slowly breaks the kiss, reopening his bright blue eyes. You open your own, loosening your hold on him. The two of you look deep into one another’s eyes for a few brief seconds.

He then seems to realize something, a gigantic blush spreading across his face as his eyes grow wide. He releases you and takes a few steps back.

“I-I’m sorry! I don’t know what happened. I just went and…I didn’t even ask…” he turns around, obviously ashamed.

You look down, embarrassed, a blush claiming your face as well. You touch your lips with the tips of your fingers. They’re still tingling a little. You smile briefly.

You’re completely confused though. The events of the day already stuck a bunch of questions into your head, and this only gave birth to a million more.

You see his staff at your feet, momentarily pushing the questions to the back of your mind. You pick it up and walk over to Jack.

“Here,” you say, holding it out to him. “You dropped this.”

Still blushing, he turns around and takes it from you. “Thanks.” He looks around at the forest. “I guess we should get you home.”

After a long and awkwardly silent flight home, the two of you find yourself on your porch once again.

The setting sun casts a warm glow on the snow in your backyard, painting with warm yellows and oranges and reds, dancing together in analogous color schemes.

“I’ll…see you tomorrow then?” you ask.

Jack nods, his white hair bouncing a little at the motion. He smiles, making your heart skip a beat. “Of course. And I’m sorry about…you know…”

You shake your head, cutting him off. “Don’t worry about it. Just let me think a bit, ok?”

“You got it,” he responds.

You wrap your arms around his torso, catching him off guard. He hugs you back, enclosing you in his familiar cold body temperature. He leans his head on the top of yours.

You let go of him and smile. You open the door. “Bye then!”

He chuckles. “Bye!”

You close the door behind you as you hear a gust of wind signaling that he has taken to the sky.

You slump against it, sitting on the floor, knees bent. You hold your head in your hands.

It can’t happen, you tell yourself. It just won’t work. He’s immortal, I’m not. He has powers, I don’t. He’s ages older than me, too, even though he looks and behaves young. I’m supposed to be helping him answer his questions, too. I can’t get involved with him like that. I’ll just be holding him back. Besides, Pitch said I’d regret the day I met him. I’m scared enough now of even hanging around him, and being romantic with him could make things even worse. I don’t want to put him into that kind of jeopardy.

The image of his face pops into your head. His smooth, pale skin. His snow-white hair. His deep blue eyes. His lips twisted into that customary mischievous smile.

His lips.

You feel your heart beat faster at the thought of him.

But…maybe I can help him better by being romantically involved, you think as you recall the incredible and unique first kiss. You know that there is no way that you’ll ever even begin to forget it. You shake your head. This is ridiculous. I can’t be falling for the immortal spirit of Winter, it’s impossible, it just won’t work out! I love Winter and all, but…but this is different…

You get up and head to the kitchen for a quick bite to eat before heading off to your room for an early bedtime.

After your humble dinner, you make your way to the bathroom. You look at yourself in the mirror. We’ll have to see how things play out, you resolve. The nape of your neck begins to bother you. You reach for it, feeling scabbed-over puncture wounds where the Nightmare had held onto you.

He may not want that kind of relationship anyway, you think as you dress your wound to the best of your ability, wincing. That kiss could have just been out of the spur of the moment. I’ll have to see what he does and wants.

You finish up your nighttime routine and crawl into bed.

I guess it will work out if it’s meant to be…

You blush lightly as you think of him again. He just won’t get out of your head.

Slightly frustrated with yourself for having romantic feelings for a mythical being, you close your eyes.

A delicate blanket of cold wraps around you beneath your comforter, seeming to hold you and reassure you. You enjoy its presence, not shivering in the slightest. A small smile finds its way onto your face.

Comforted, you drift off into a deep slumber.
Ah, questions questions questions. What will the next chapter hold, I wonder? Hmm.
I'm sorry if this isn't how you guys would think or anything...not my best chapter...(still fangirling myself over chapter 18) x3
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 18: [link]
Chapter 20: [link]
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
Blush Falls asleep. Sleepy  Love this story.:squee: 
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you enjoy it!!! I'm terribly sorry it's taken me so long to reply to all of your comments. I've been so busy lately!!
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
no problem i don't mind.
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Ugh! Why do I have to think about it this way? Why can't I be all like 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕?oh well!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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XD
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The kiss! Ahhh! Why do I have to be mortal?!?!?! No one has any idea of the frustrations we fangirls go through.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right?!? That and being in love with a fictional character...
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Stupid schediaphilia...
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WarriorsCatsLover333 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved 18!!!
FANNGURRLSS UNITE!!!
Anyways, reading this and seeing the thing say ...'I dont want to be romantically involved with him...' I'm just like,
OH, HECK NAW!
YES I DO!
FANGIRL!!!
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Kikicupecake Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
Yes we fangirls should all unite and save the internet together and wear those super cool outfits they wear on Sailor Moon and....Yes I'm weird. DON'T JUGE ME!!! :stinkeye:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Frost-life Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wonder how will this end!
THIS IS SUPER GREAT!!!!
IM FANGIRLING RIGHT NOW!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKE IT
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Frost-life Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
No prablemo... hehe :)
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CertifiedChocoholic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Well, I was just wondering. Do I have parents? :D

By the way, this may not be your best chapter but it was still fluffy~ ;) :)

SINcerely,
CC
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I kinda decided to leave them out, leaving it open to your own case in life. The parents in RotG weren't really important and forgotten, too. I mean, seriously, where's all the kids' parents when they just up and leave out of their beds to go fight Pitch in the middle of the night?!? So I left the parents out of my fiction...reminds me a bit of Charlie Brown and stuff... xD
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lawlsz Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MNghh!!Ghhh!RAWRRR!! :iconfaintsplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Photographer
Thats's so cute! Jack's all chivalrous!! Awe! And I thought Chivalry was dead.........! I think I'm falling for him even harder!!!!!!!!!!! Number One Priorty: Meet him one day, just so I know.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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theangelofdeath777 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
#fangirling# love this story
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
glad to hear it :D
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Kyuubecky Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student
....I cant remember if I ever commented on this one.... .....DONT CARE THIS WAS FLIPPING HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTT!! SOO CUTE AND MOST OF ALL HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTT!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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StardustWingsLight Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist
My god, I love this story. You are an exceptional writer, and just reading this makes me fangirl with every chapter. XD I just started reading this story today. *blushes and looks to the side* I hope Jack loves me, or I sure would get depressed... But anyway! Love it so far! :meow:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you kindly, and I can't wait to see your reaction to later chapters XD
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StardustWingsLight Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist
You will not be disappointed, I can guarantee you that. XD
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
My first kiss......AWESOME.... Hell yeah, hopefully Jack loves me... I'd go suicide if he doesn't.. No, not really.. Just be really sad that I'd lock myself in my room for a month or so.. But what about school?... Eh, screw school..
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
don't worry so much XD
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meekgeek Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was so great! ^o^ Just how I would think. I'd want to be with him but i'd be so afraid of holding him back too X3 Ohhh I hope he loves me lol!! xD
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
x3
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SandrOops Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmegustaplz:
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nekodama Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
seconded! hahaha
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SandrOops Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahaha I didn't really know what else to say...an amazing story based on Jack Frost this is just...:iconallmyloveplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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booklover4life Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha you KNOW the chapter is good if you fangirl over it yourself X3
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
x3
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xSnowFrostx Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I started reading the stories on here and then, well ive been sitting on this bed for the past 3 and a half hours.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
good to hear x3 you should probably get up and walk around though, ehe
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STAG-KING Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I started at 12am and now its 2:10am.... Is that bad
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nah xD
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STAG-KING Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I finally finished at 3........ 3 HOURS OF AWESOME cant wait for part 28
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha, i'm starting it up right now :)
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STAG-KING Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconspazattackplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wahaahhahaha xD
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STAG-KING Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that icon is funny and how long does it usually take to write them? No rush
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Once I set my mind to it, usually an hour or two
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kgwriter Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
i laughed a little at this chapter. the whole part where i'm considering if i should get involved with jack? y'know, because of the whole "it might not be good for either of us, and will probably break my heart" thing? so NOT me. screw the world, gimme jack!
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Animefanatic4eva Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
ikr skip the annoying thoughts and say "Screw it I love Jack"
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