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Clink. Clank. Psssshhhhhh. Pop. Shuffle.

You lay on your couch, listening to the sounds of Jack rummaging through your kitchen as he whips up your breakfast, opening and closing just about every drawer and cabinet in search of the right tools. You haven’t heard anything break yet, which gives you a small amount of comfort.

No smoke or explosions, either. That’s always a good sign.

The smell of delicious food soon makes its way down from the kitchen and into your nose, encircling you. You take a long, deep breath, your stomach growling in response. Your mouth begins to water.

You hear a pause in the symphony of kitchen commotion. Jack enters the living room and sets up a tray next to you, just as you once did for him.

He doesn’t have his cloak on. He must have taken it off so it didn’t get in the way as he cooked.

“Almost ready,” he reports.

He flashes you a winning smile on his way out. You feel yourself blush, burying your face in your comforter.

Why does he have to be so attractive?

A few minutes and chinks of silverware later, Jack reenters the room carrying your food, smiling proudly.

“Here you go,” he says as he sets it down on the tray. You notice that he’s wearing oven mitts. Probably so he didn’t directly touch anything, you reason.

You’re forced to withhold a giggle. It’s a fairly funny sight—the spirit of winter with oven mitts on.

You sit up, wrapping yourself in your comforter to where you’re covered in it but can still use your arms and hands.

The food in front of you looks like it was cooked and plated like a professional chef.

You look up at Jack, surprised. He winks. “You learn a thing or two in nearly 300 years. Go on, try it.”

You look back down at the food. The smell of it clears up your sinuses significantly. You take up your utensil and lift a bite of it to your mouth.

It’s the best thing you’ve eaten in years. It’s not even close to having been ruined by a cold touch. The flavors are perfectly balanced, working together in complete harmony. You had no idea that (name of the food again) could be prepared in the way that Jack Frost has prepared it for you.

“Is it good?” you hear him ask. He’s taken of the mitts and is holding onto them in one hand, motioning to your breakfast with the other.

You swallow. Still a bit in the trance that the food has put you into, you smile and nod.

“It’s delicious! Compliments to the chef.”

He smiles even wider, obviously happy that you like his cooking.

As you eat, he attempts to light a fire, going through almost a whole box of matches before one finally has a strong enough will to take. You try to tell him a couple of times that you don’t need a one, but he shakes his head, clearly determined to get one going. He sits in front of it, brow furrowed, as if staring at it will make the log catch fire.

You finish eating and lay back down, your stomach full. Jack has successfully started a fire, small flames crackling away.

Resting sounds nice.

The last thing you remember before drifting off into sleep is Jack in front of the fireplace, the flames illuminating his pale face and snow-white hair, reflecting into his deep blue eyes in a beautiful contrast.
This is a pretty short one, guys. The next one will probably be another short one, then the one after a fairly long one to make up for the shortness. x3
it's a meh chapter, in my opinion. not the best, but not extremely horrible either. i'm not 100% proud of it.
i'm still recovering from finals though, so my writing probably isn't at my best since i'm basically braindead. The braindeadness is also producing in this short chapter. Sorry! xD
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QueenNevaofarendale Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Yummy mmmmmmmmmmmmmm CREPES.....................
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jeffyarts Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
Ahh nap time my favorite past time. *i said jokingly.*
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
okay okay OKAY!  I wish that when I open my eyes in the next chapter that I awaken in my bed and to the sight of Jacks face centimeters away from mine!!!  that would be SO romantic!!!  : D
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artlover626 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
you like Edward and Bella?
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:iconartlover626:
artlover626 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student General Artist
sorry I meant to say you mean like Edward does to Bella
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
....whooops. x3
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Jack with oven mitts on and holding soup (the exact food he lied about freezing) I'd like to see that
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
that would make me laugh so hard...  X D
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really want someone to draw it. o.o
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Phantomotheoperaphan Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Oh gosh yes!
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:iconwinkyfish:
winkyfish Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Artist

Oh. My. Goodness.

Bacon actually just got better.

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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's...near impossible. Oh my goodness.
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:iconwinkyfish:
winkyfish Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist

Nothing is impossible, my dear friend. :meow:

I'm afraid it just did.

Man, I haven't gotten to the story in a long while... where was I... chapter twenty-something?

Welp, there's no time like the present to continue rereading it! ^o3o^

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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack made me chicken noodle soup...? (LOL the oven mitts :XD: )
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
he made me the same!! :D
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SonicLover626 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I would like him to make me beef stew......now THAT would be AWESOME!!!!!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oooo that sounds delicious o.o
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WarriorsCatsLover333 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jack Frost made me chicken noodle soup...?
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's what he made me, too :3 and it was friggin delicious
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist
lol mac and cheese made by a winning chef... strange thought
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it can so happen. i mean, imagine...mac n cheese with three cheeses on top, made to be a bit crispy, with some fresh stuff on top...yum.
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist
that would be awesome
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CertifiedChocoholic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
Still! Imagine Jack Frost taking care of you! :3 I'm gonna faint from all this heat! ;) :)

SINcerely,
CC
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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zeldafangirl713 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Best. Sick Day. Ever. Considering the fact that I am actually home sick right now!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome...kinda xD
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Photographer
Still in love!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay!
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TalkativeTiaD Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
geez, waffles aren't that hard to make!!! XD I love these stories!!!!!!
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
he just makes a mess of everything x3
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TalkativeTiaD Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i dont think so!!! not everything. XD
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kalliat Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I never knew he could make toast that well! :D
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
It's official. You are the best writer I've come across my whole entire life.. Well not directly 'come across' just read your fics and witnessed one of the most awesome fics and a freakin awesome author of all time.. In my opinion, that is.. So I shall give you the cookie jar filled with the most awesome cookies and zhe title, 'The Most epic, Most amazing, Most awesome Author out there'
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!!
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meekgeek Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know i have homework to do..so much homework, but i just can't STOP reading xD hahaha
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's a good thing! but a bad thing...I'm not sure if I should be happy or sorry xD
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blaze1893 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013
I laughed so hard hot soup came out of my nose it didn't really hurt because I was dieing of laughter.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh dear XD
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PoppyMaddison Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy crap, you are with out a doubt the best fan fic writer i have ever come across. I just wish I was reading this in winter :(
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. And that would be nice...but perhaps you can read it again when winter comes around? :)
I love your icon by the way. I adore Totoro.
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PoppyMaddison Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Count on it :)
Thank you, hehe so do I
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Fabnormal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought he didn't like soup and here he goes fixing it like a pro...?
Ah, my low standards are ruining this :iconlesighplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
he doesn't like cold soup.
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Fabnormal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Point made~ :meow:
Gosh, I am fangirling over these chapters like nobody's business! Why are you so good at this?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
uhm...i have no idea. x3
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:iconfabnormal:
Fabnormal Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well you're fabulous at it, and I've already read what you go far, you're better keep it up! :)
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i will most definitely try :)
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Fabnormal Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay~! :la:
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FaLyn101 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Why does he have to be so attractive?...because he is THE JACK FROST!!
And i can just imagine him making my favorite food when i'm sick...now when i'm sick, i'm just going to imagine him with me
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