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I sat there alone,
nothing to keep me company but my tears.
No sounds around me heard;
No sights beyond my mind seen;
Nothing felt save for the cold air.
i knew of nothing.
Nothing knew of me.

And then came your voice.
It told me to take your outstretched hand. I did.
The warmth overtook me.
I felt my hear skip a beat
as you helped me rise up, opened
my closed eyes, and soothed
me with your presence.

You told me to look.
I shifted my gaze from you to the landscape.
I forgot how to breathe.
I hadn't realized that I
had been sitting in a golden
meadow, in a land filled
with wondrous beauty.

The birds were chirping;
the wind rustling the tall, golden fox tails;
the sky open and blue.
The giant oak tree under
which I had once sat, unaware,
swayed with the music
I once did not hear.

Now I sit with you
under that tree, in this land teeming with life,
my head on your shoulder,
your strong arm around my waist,
and I realize that it was your
love that revived me
and made me aware.

For this, I cannot begin to thank you enough.
Words cannot express this deep gratitude.
So I will sum it up into the three best words
of which I can think.

I love you.
Wrote this one ages ago, inspired by absolutely nothing but a gut feeling. And yet, now it seems like it was written in my past for my present, meant to be relevant in my life today. Written about 4 years ago. Yay for finding old drawings and poems scattered throughout a dirty room.
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sizeby Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
...wow
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Isamu-Sugai Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful.
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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Isamu-Sugai Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
BRAVO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

* tears in eyes *
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
X)
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kgwriter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
that. was. BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! *stands up applauding wildly* :iconclappingplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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kgwriter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem! you're an amazing writer and poet! have you ever thought about writing competitivly?
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
eh...i did twice because my school forced me to, so i didn't really try. plus, they forced me to do a play once, and the other time was a poem (that when i was in middle school). but recently, no, havne't thought of it.
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kgwriter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
i get that. my school forced me to write a poem last year, so i purposly made it controversial so it wouldn't get in, but no one would let the school put their poems in, so mine was... i'm still getting the heat for it...
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pkmntrainerkelcey Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist
this is so bittersweet and fantastic :iconcryforeverplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Yukii53 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
It's amazing, I realy feld this feeling :tears:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay
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martialarts210 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Damn you're a good writer, it's so amazing. :iconhappytearsplz:
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you~
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Lunarwolf210 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Its so beautiful!!!!!! TwT
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! :)
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