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Don't leave me here alone,
at the mercy of
the darkness.
The loneliness scares me.
It suffocates me,
puts chains on my wings,
and traps me.
Please...don't let it do this
to me. Stay by my
side, right here.
Whisper something sweetly,
softly, to me...like
a lover.
Tell me that it will all
be all right...as long
as you're here.
Reach out your hand toward
me, touch me gently...
tenderly.
Let me feel your presence;
know you're here with me;
loving me.

Please...
This is a poem that I wrote a very long time ago. I found it again while cleaning up my room, and figured, hey, why not post it?
Sorry to all my watchers that this isn't another chapter of my fic. ^_^"
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Lunarwolf210 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I can tell you one thing...I would never leave you alone. No one needs to feel alone. :)
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :blushes:
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silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
sniffle ....
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:blushes:
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silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
when did you write this ??
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, probably 4 years ago
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:iconsilentray723:
silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
ah ...
its really good ... for some reason it reminds me of Max and Fang.
* charecters from a book called Maximum Ride by: James Patterson *
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really? cool
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:iconsilentray723:
silentray723 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
I don't know why though ... %-P
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:iconryxer:
ryxer Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
beautiful :heart:
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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:iconryxer:
ryxer Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
your welcome
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Chukapix Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is sooooo beautiful!!! It doesn't matter if it's not a new chapter :)
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :)
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:iconkitkat6251:
kitkat6251 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful :heart:
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks~
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Miss-Darkness297 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i like it :) really good
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you :D
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Miss-Darkness297 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
no problem
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i like this :D its very sweet
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :)
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YahoolYafool Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob :D
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Crystalxchaos Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student General Artist
I like this one.
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:iconlegendoffullmetal:
LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yay :)
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Isamu-Sugai Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting...
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:O
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Isamu-Sugai Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha.
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lunalake6544 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, this is really sweet
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LegendofFullmetal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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